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Why is it cliche to wish for you
to kiss me under the rain and hold
me until I feel like I can't ever
breathe again?

<I don't want to breathe anyway; it's
feeling my heart at the tip of my tongue
that makes it painful to live.>

Sunny days make me sad, when I
realize that it can't possibly last
for my lifetime; because it always
gets cloudy; it always rains.

<I only like it when the skies aren't
sunny if I'm trying to catch snowflakes
with my tongue and we're sharing the
same scarf on Christmas Eve.>

Freshman year is about making
friends, going through past heartbreaks,
finding new love, going through a
sweet, yet bitter, relationship and
it's trying to forget your past.

<Except you're still living in my
heart and I can't forgive and forget, because
I think you engraved your name into
my brain in cursive.>

It's spring and it's raining droplets and
he's kissing my tears away while I think
about you in his arms because

it was a sweet love, like coffee candy,
that leaves a bitter aftertaste behind.
:iconi-w-i-s-h:
when I fell in love with you, I wondered what happened to the innocent girl I once knew.
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^3wyl Oct 18, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Interesting perspective... especially towards the end. I like the style and the tone of this piece. The way you've began with a question engages us nicely indeed. :)

It definitely makes you think, this.
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:iconsweetxhoney7:
SO SWEET! when i read it, i literally tasted coffee candy :) the sweet kind
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:iconsweetxhoney7:
i want coffee candy :(
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:iconi-w-i-s-h:
dude IIII want coffee candy <boys> jk lol
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:iconi-w-i-s-h:
uuu taste like coffee candy D8
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